[Grammar] Kindly check the sentences which I wanted to use as a main heading in my SOP

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Dear Sir/Madam,
Here is the sentence which I wanted to write as a main heading in my STATEMENT OF PURPOSE. Kindly check the sentence and let me know if there are any corrections to be made.

1. 'It is not just a Statement of Purpose...It is a crusade for accomplishing my passion on research.'
2. 'I wouldn't call it just a Statement of Purpose...I name it as a crusade for
accomplishing my passion on research instead.'
3. 'It is not just a Statement of Purpose...After all, it is a crusade for accomplishing my passion on research.'

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1. ..passion for research.

2. I am not sure the word 'crusade' can be applied to research. Crusade is a struggle or a campaign.

3. 'accomplish my passion'
Passion is great enthusiasm. You say you accomplish your objectives, mission, task, etc., not 'accomplish passion'.

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Hello Sir/Madam,

Could you kindly let me know the word which can supplant accomplish?

Could you kindly let me know the above all sentence structures are correct?
 

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1. It common to say: to fuel a passion.

2. You don't use .... or shortforms in serious writing.

3.' A statement of purpose' should be in small letters.

4. The sentences are OK, I prefer the 1st sentence.

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