[General] prepare our environment for learning english

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In my job location, the accessibility to net is very very bad. i wanna buy a smartphone.
One of way to learn English is to prepare our environment. It means make all of things to learn English. for example for each day write a popular quotes or write our schedule in English. What is your idea about this?
 

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[STRIKE]In[/STRIKE] At my job location, [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] accessibility to the net is very, very bad. I [STRIKE]wanna[/STRIKE] want to buy a smartphone.

One [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] way to learn English is to prepare our environment. It means make all of things to learn English. For example, [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] each day write a popular [STRIKE]quotes[/STRIKE] quote or write our schedule in English. [STRIKE]What is your idea[/STRIKE] What do you think about this?

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

I don't know what you mean by "prepare our environment" or "It means make all of things to learn English". Do you mean that you think it is important to surround yourself with things which help you to learn English?

I'm not sure what relevance the fact that you want to buy a smartphone has.
 
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Welcome to the forum. :hi:

I don't know what you mean by "prepare our environment" or "It means make all of things to learn English". Do you mean that you think it is important to surround yourself with things which help you to learn English?

I'm not sure what relevance the fact that you want to buy a smartphone has.

Hi EMSR.
Wow, my english writing was a bit bad. do you agree??
It's relevance to buying smartphone is that i can search in the internet, and comment in this forums, and improve my english skill, or listen to musics or audio books.
Your sentences could explain what I mean (Surround yourself)exactly, thanks.
Your english skill is very high....
 

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Hi EMSR2D2 (if you are going to quote usernames, please quote them in full.)
Wow, my English writing was a bit bad. Do you agree? (A single punctuation mark suffices.)
[strike]It's[/strike] The relevance [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] of buying a smartphone is that I can search [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] the internet, [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] comment in this [STRIKE]forums[/STRIKE] forum, [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] improve my English skill, or listen to [STRIKE]musics[/STRIKE] music or audio books.
Your sentences [STRIKE]could[/STRIKE] explain what I mean by "surround yourself" exactly, thanks.
Your English skill is very high.

Please see my amendments above. Your English isn't bad but there are some basic mistakes and you definitely need to work on your punctuation and capitalisation. Always follow these rules of written English:

- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with a single, appropriate punctuation mark.
- Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
- Always capitalise proper nouns (English, Microsoft, China)
 

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Thanks, But I think we departed from the main subject. Do you agree?
 

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Not really, no. I corrected your first post, which is what I assumed you wanted. I then helped you further by making corrections to your next post. All the comments made on this forum are intended to help learners to improve their English.
 
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