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    #1

    help

    Hai...
    please check for me the sentence below...


    Your material submission for metal deck has been rejected, which are not compliance with our procedure.

    Please resubmit the material using the form as attached. Please attached together with the catalogue and picture sample and upload the submission to project system for approval.

    Should you have any queries, please do not hesitate to contact our office for clarification.

    Thank you.

    Best regards,
    Rina

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    Re: help

    Quote Originally Posted by fifie_danny View Post
    Hai Hi. ...
    Please check for me the sentence below.

    Which sentence would you like us to check? You wrote five sentences and a closing. Please note my corrections above too. Start every sentence with a capital letter. End every sentence with a single, appropriate punctuation mark.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: help

    Hi...check for me all below sentence..


    Your material submission for metal deck has been rejected, which are not compliance with our procedure.

    Please resubmit the material using the form as attached.

    Please attached together with the catalogue and picture sample and upload the submission to project system for approval.


    Should you have any queries, please do not hesitate to contact our office for clarification.

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