You don't have to provide this much detail here. You can simply say: We regret to inform you that you have not been registered due to the fact that you have not submitted your transcript. We have been unsuccessful in our many attempts to contact you via your mobile phone.We regret to inform you that you have not been registered due to the fact you have not submitted your transcript and we have been trying to contact you through your mobile phone but your were not reachable and the time when you were reachable you were not picking your mobile phone.
Again, this portion can be simplified: You indicated in your application that you completed BBA Accounting in 2014, while your statement of result shows that you completed your Bachelor degree in 2013. This matter needs to be clarified and we must receive your transcript before you can be considered for January 2015 registration.In your application form you have indicated that you have completed BBA Accounting in 2014 while your statement of result shows you have completed bachelor Degree in 2013 , we fail to understand which year have completed your Bachelor Degree? Is it 2013 0r 2014 and if it is on 2013 why you have not submitted your Transcript up to this time.
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