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    #1

    Cover letter problems

    Hi there everyone,

    Im brand new here, and I would like to ask somebody for help. Im writing my cover letter (in english for first time), and I know my english isnt perfect. So, can you check me these sentences and correct mistakes please (written in italic)?

    1. I gained a great deal of experiences from areas as marketing, management, communication and project/product management at my previous job.

    (here is for me important, if I need use experience/or experiences)

    2. During the period of employment for TV Media I led a small business marketing team and I attended an estimated more than 2000 business meetings with business partners and clients of the company.

    (I dont work there anymore - Did I use correct tense?)

    3. I always tried meet the needs of my business partners and build strong long-lasting relationships with them.

    (same question - did I use correct tense? - is correct I always tried .... or Ive always tried ....)

    4. I also often cooperated at creating and implementation of marketing, PR and communication strategies of the company.

    (here is for me important, if I need write in this sentence - the marketing, the PR and the communication strategies of the company - probably not, I think - and - is it correct to use "cooperated at creating, ... or cooperated in creating ....)

    5. Thanks to my more than 3 years of experience working as a Marketing Director and more than 2 years of experiences working as a Marketing Specialist in a company operating on the media and marketing sector, I am highly skilled at creating commercial campaigns, (ATL and BTL) marketing campaigns and others marketing, PR and communication projects.

    (is this sentence correct?)

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    I will be very grateful for any advice.

    Thank you.

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    #2

    Re: Cover letter problems

    Im brand new here, and I would like to ask somebody for help. Im writing my cover letter (in English for first time), and I know my English isnt perfect. So, can you check for me these sentences and correct mistakes please (written in italic)?

    1. I gained a great deal of experiences from areas as in marketing, management, communication and project/product management at from my previous job.

    (here is for me important, if I need use experience/or experiences)

    2. During the period of employment forwith TV Media I led a small business marketing team and I attended an estimated more than 2000 business meetings with business partners and clients of the company.

    (I dont work there anymore - Did I use correct tense?)

    3. I have always tried to meet the needs of my business partners and build strong long-lasting relationships with them.

    (same question - did I use correct tense? - is correct I always tried .... or Ive always tried ....)

    4. I also have often cooperated at creating been involved in the planning and implementation stages of marketing, PR and communication strategies of the company.

    (here is for me important, if I need write in this sentence - the marketing, the PR and the communication strategies of the company - probably not, I think - and - is it correct to use "cooperated at creating, ... or cooperated in creating ....)

    5. Thanks to my more than 3 years of experience working as a Marketing Director and more than 2 years of experiences working as a Marketing Specialist in a company operating on in the media and marketing sector, I am highly skilled competent at creating commercial campaigns, (ATL and BTL) marketing campaigns and others marketing, PR and communication projects.

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    #3

    Re: Cover letter problems

    THANK YOU "tedmc" !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    #4

    Re: Cover letter problems

    I have a one more question. Did I use correct words and tenses in this sentences?
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    1. I was a member of the production team (as a director, copywriter and manager for the budget) in production of more than 600 audio-visual commercial projects including commercial spots, commercial documents and interviews, various commercial and non-commercial formats of audio-visual programs and about 10 large corporate presentations.


    2. I have written hundreds of marketing texts not only for advertising spots, but also for corporate presentations, catalogs, commercial interviews and PR films.

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    Thank you very-very much for your help.

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