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    Hello there,
    I'm writing some easy content for a Korean website. Nothing special, just few sentences.
    Since i'm not a native language speaker i'd like to have your opinion about the grammar.
    Here the sentences:
    __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _______________

    1. Through a series of online marketing techniques we promote your website by increasing its visibility with a consequent improvement of qualified traffic. We are ready to launch your business in Korea

    2 .Let our expert designers to create your graphic project or collaborate with us to develop any kind of creative work. We offer a full range of services, from business card to web design.

    3. Through the use of “White hat” SEO techniques we ensure a steady growth of unique visitors to your website, with a consequent improvement of the brand image and the business value.

    4. Starting a business in another country requires fast and flexible approaches to various and complex problems. Marketing and advertising in Korea develop in the digital market in a different way than the American-European environment. Is required an excellent knowledge of the culture and the local market. Seek advice and guidance in a country like Korea can make the difference between success and failure.

    5. Thanks to digital marketing tools and a careful analysis of the local market and competition, we ensure an immediate return on investment. By collaborating with our Koreans partners we will plan a winning strategy with a high penetration rate that will optimize your revenue. We will share our ideas with you working transparently from the start of each project.

    6. Here some examples of events and projects organized and managed successfully by Xx. Each project is carefully followed from the beginning to the end in order to ensure the maximum result. Analysis of results and monthly reports will help you to improve your marketing strategies.

    7. Share your challenges and ideas with us and we will discuss ways our customized solutions can help take your business to the next level.

    8. Xx is a marketing agency that works to promote local and foreign companies in Korea. With headquarters in Seoul has been working for years to provide full marketing services collaborating with foreign and Korean partners.
    With an excellent knowledge of the market, the local language and a wide experience in the online marketing field Xx is able to provide customized strategies to achieve your goals. Our staff and most of our partners have been working for multinational corporations operating in Korea. We conduct systematic quality control activities to ensure the highest quality service. You can pay more attention on your critical decision making and let us take care of the rest.Contact us if you want to work with us and enter the Korean market, we will develop a strategic plan that best fits the characteristics of your business.

    9. Choosing Xx as partner means to rely on a team of experts who will work with you to develop winning strategies. Transparency is a key factor. Thanks to regular reports and analysis you will be in touch with our team of specialists who are always ready to assist you in every phase of the project.
    The efficiency of our agency is outlined by three factors that distinguish us from the competition:

    • Reliability: To perform the promised service dependably and accurately.
    • Responsiveness: To respond you within 4 business hours to provide prompt service.
    • Assurance: To assign right experts of the service you require.



    10. Xx is based on some fundamental values ​​that determine the corporate line. Starting from important values ​​such as reliability and trust, we can define:

    • Our Vision: Xx is committed to being the most trusted and relied-upon partner for multinational corporations operating in Korea.
    • Our Mission: Delivering quality and cost-effective solutions that provide value to out clients’ business requirements manageably.
    • Our Core Values: People who demonstrate respect, responsibilty, transparency, integrity, accountability and client value creation with enthusiasm and honesty



    11. Companies willing to invest in South Korea are faced with numerous difficulties, linguistic and cultural but also economic and political. Doing business without knowing perfectly the local culture can be very risky. Our professionals are competent and efficient and working with our wide network of partners can provide the support you need while minimizing the risks of investment.

    12. Xx is an online marketing agency based in Seoul, South Korea. With years of experience in the field of web marketing, Xx is one of the top agency in Korea. The collaboration with local and global partners has contributed to the success of our clients. We work in collaboration with trusted partners most of whom worked for multinational companies in Korea.


    Thank you in advance!
    Best Regards.

    Last edited by emsr2d2; 28-Oct-2014 at 13:44. Reason: Standardised the font type and size, added line breaks

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    Re: Website Grammar Check

    I don't correct writing, but I would use targeted traffic, not qualified traffic. It is the term I hear in SEO contexts in the UK.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tdol View Post
    I don't correct writing, but I would use targeted traffic, not qualified traffic. It is the term I hear in SEO contexts in the UK.
    Thank you for the tip. :) I'll change it for sure.
    Is there someone who can kindly review the grammar?
    Thank you in advance.

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    Re: Website Grammar Check

    Anyone who can help me?
    I really need to review this content before the end of the week but my english is rusty

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    Re: Website Grammar Check

    T_T Just a quick review ...in order to understand if I did awkward mistakes or else.

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    Re: Website Grammar Check

    I wouldn't say that you will launch the business in Korea- businesses do that. You could promote/advertise, etc, the business.

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    Re: Website Grammar Check

    Thank you again Tdol :)
    Really helpful!
    I'll change that term for sure.
    By the way...no grammar mistakes? :o

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