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    Angry can anyone please help me correcting the few mistakes

    The rise of unisex fragrances

    Why is it that women love perfume as much as men love cars ?

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    « Just for us » is a new version of perfume, inspired from the oriental fragrance the « Oud » . Our perfume is created with a unique source of « oud » which is 100% natural , this new fragrance is powerfull and seductive that attracts mainly both sexes.
    The liquid of the perfume is also innovative ; it is colored in black but becomes invisible when it touches the skin. « Just for us » shows that just a few ingredients can make a big impression. Votes of pear, saffron and orange flowers that enhances the sensuality of the Oud at the core.
    Such a unique and smooth scent fragrance is available as 50 ml and 75 ml at rates of 150£ .
    As well, this refreshing scent works for gals and guys; So why don’t you just be one of us ?

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    Re: can anyone please help me correcting the few mistakes

    Welcome to the forum.

    When will you submit your essay to your teacher for marking/grading?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: can anyone please help me correcting the few mistakes

    thank you

    it's for tomorrow
    Last edited by Siinda; 27-Oct-2014 at 12:43.

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    Re: can anyone please help me correcting the few mistakes

    Then we wish you good luck. As you will have seen in the Forum Rules, we do not help people with their homework. It would give you an unfair advantage. Your teacher is not interested in what we can write. Your teacher needs to see what you can write without any help. That is how your teacher understands where your strengths and weaknesses are.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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