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    Angry can anyone please help me correcting the few mistakes

    The rise of unisex fragrances

    Why is it that women love perfume as much as men love cars ?

    This will never be the case after making the « Just for us » perfume.

    « Just for us » is a new version of perfume, inspired from the oriental fragrance the « Oud » . Our perfume is created with a unique source of « oud » which is 100% natural , this new fragrance is powerfull and seductive that attracts mainly both sexes.
    The liquid of the perfume is also innovative ; it is colored in black but becomes invisible when it touches the skin. « Just for us » shows that just a few ingredients can make a big impression. Votes of pear, saffron and orange flowers that enhances the sensuality of the Oud at the core.
    Such a unique and smooth scent fragrance is available as 50 ml and 75 ml at rates of 150£ .
    As well, this refreshing scent works for gals and guys; So why don’t you just be one of us ?

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    Re: can anyone please help me correcting the few mistakes

    Welcome to the forum.

    When will you submit your essay to your teacher for marking/grading?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: can anyone please help me correcting the few mistakes

    thank you

    it's for tomorrow

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