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    no one here to help

    i posted an essay and i would like anyone to help me finiding the mistakes and correct them as well

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    #2

    Re: no one here to help

    We don't do homework here, Siinda. Your teacher will mark it.

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    Re: no one here to help

    i needed some help because i couldn't find the mistakes that my teacher told me to correct in the essay that i wrote

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    Re: no one here to help

    Quote Originally Posted by Siinda View Post
    I posted an essay and ​I would like anyone someone to help me finiding find the mistakes and correct them as well.
    Quote Originally Posted by Siinda View Post
    I needed some help because I couldn't find the mistakes that my teacher told me to correct in the essay that I wrote.
    Please see my corrections to your posts above, in red. Are these the kinds of errors you make regularly in your English writing?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #5

    Re: no one here to help

    thank you that's what i need but actually the mistakes that i made in this essay :

    The rise of unisex fragrances

    Why is it that women love perfume as much as men love cars ?

    This will never be the case after making the Just for us perfume.

    Just for us is a new version of perfume, inspired from the oriental fragrance the Oud . Our perfume is created with a unique source of oud which is 100% natural , this new fragrance is powerfull and seductive that attracts mainly both sexes.
    The liquid of the perfume is also innovative ; it is colored in black but becomes invisible when it touches the skin. Just for us shows that just a few ingredients can make a big impression. Votes of pear, saffron and orange flowers that enhances the sensuality of the Oud at the core.
    Such a unique and smooth scent fragrance is available as 50 ml and 75 ml at rates of 150 .
    As well, this refreshing scent works for gals and guys; So why don’t you just be one of us ?

    and thank you in advance

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    #6

    Re: no one here to help

    We don't do homework- that's your job.

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