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    please help to edit my letter which goes to my boss

    I would like to inform your office that I have already started attending my course in MSc Marketing at Mzumbe University but I have faced the challenge of time for attending the class.

    I have been registered to attend classes at 19:00 -22:00 hours which is very inconvenient to me. I therefore request your office either to allow me to attend class during working hours from 8:30 to 11:30 (which is two and half hours) Monday to Friday as per attached timetable or allowed to change my programme from Ms. Marketing to MBA corporate Management which start from 16:00 to 19:00 , time which will be convenient to me.


    Your advice and approval for this matter is sought


    Yours sincerely,

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    Re: please help to edit my letter which goes to my boss

    Quote Originally Posted by chiko View Post
    I would like to inform your office that I have already started attending my course in MSc Marketing at Mzumbe University but I have faced the challenge of time for attending the class some problems with the timing of the classes.

    I have been registered am required to attend classes at from 19:00-22:00 hours which is unfortunately very inconvenient to for me.

    I would therefore request your office either to allow me prefer to attend class during working hours from 8:30 to 11:30 (which is two and half 2.5 hours) Monday to Friday as per the attached timetable or request that I be allowed to change my programme from Ms. Marketing to MBA Corporate Management, with classes which start from 16:00 to 19:00, time which will would be much more convenient to for me.

    Please let me know as soon as possible if you agree to my request and, if so, which option you will authorise.


    Your advice and approval for this matter is sought

    Yours sincerely,
    See above. I think you should explain why the classes from 1900-2200 are so inconvenient for you.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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