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    editing the paragraph ( corrections )

    But in ancient times people bothered of their health only when they fell ill. But now the physicians has discovered the factors responsible for patients diseases.
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    Re: editing the paragraph ( corrections )

    Welcome to the forum.

    Do you have a question for us? The title "editing the paragraph (corrections)" is not clear. Who wrote those sentences? Why do you think they need to be corrected? What is the purpose of them?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: editing the paragraph ( corrections )

    This is a sentence in a paragraph which has to be corrected

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    #4

    Re: editing the paragraph ( corrections )

    Help me to correct that sentence

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    Re: editing the paragraph ( corrections )

    Did you write the sentence yourself?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: editing the paragraph ( corrections )

    Quote Originally Posted by sara_padam View Post
    Please help me to correct that sentence.
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