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    I need help to rewrite this passage correctly.

    A frogs eggs are called egg spawn. The eggs shells protect the egg spawn. Soon the eggs hatch. Tadpoles come out. The new tadpoles tails are very long. Did you know that tadpoles eat frog eggs?

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    Re: I need help to rewrite this passage correctly.

    Welcome to the forum.

    Who wrote those sentences? Why do you think it needs to be rewritten?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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