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    Could you please check this?

    Hi I am mamta choudhary.I have passed my 10th class from nagbani school.I did my 12th class from jain school.I have completed my graduation from women college.I got admission in

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    Re: Could you please check this?

    Hi Mamta

    Please pay attention to:
    - punctuation marks
    -capitalisation of special nouns
    - spacing of sentences - leave a space after a period

    You completed your degree and have graduated. You don't say you completed your graduation.
    You got admitted/gained admission into a course.
    Last edited by tedmc; 02-Nov-2014 at 04:26.

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