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    Need Help Elaborting this sentence...

    Hello - I need help elaborating on this response.

    Question : Do you know why the amount of this award was just published on the website? It was awarded late May.

    MY ANSWER : We just recently added the awarded values to our website.

    How can I elaborate and sound professional? I feel as if my response may be too short. Any ideas?

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    Re: Need Help Elaborting this sentence...

    It really depends on the real reason for the late addition of the awards to your website. It seems surprising to me that an award that was given/received in May has only appeared on a website in October but there are myriad reasons why that might be. I suggest you find out why the delay occurred and then explain it honestly.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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