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As you will have seen in the Forum Guidelines/Rules, we cannot help with homework or coursework. Your teacher is only interested in what you can do, on your own, without any help. There's no point showing your teacher work which we have written or rewritten. By handing in your own work, your teacher will be able to see where your strengths and weaknesses are and tailor his/her help as a result.
(Also note that we do not offer help by email or Private Message. Any queries and answers must be done publicly.)
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