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Could you please help me with this sentence:
“I went to visit Moscow. I stayed there for a week. The first day I visited the Red Square. During the other six days I visited a lot of museums and different places”
Is the underlined phrase correct?
Thanks for your help.
I would put a comma after "day" and "days" in those sentences. Note that it's just "Red Square", not "the Red Square".
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.