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    help to edit my letter which goes to my boss

    Dear Sir

    I was supposed to start my annual leave on 10th November ,2014 up to 7th December, 2014, but due to pending works which are still in my desks I will not be able to start my leave.


    I therefore request your good office to cancel my leave till the pending works has been cleared.



    Hope my request will be considered favaourably.

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    Re: help to edit my letter which goes to my boss

    It seems awfully formal to me (as an American). But you might say:

    Due to projects I haven't finished yet I will be unable to start my leave when originally planned.


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    Re: help to edit my letter which goes to my boss

    Quote Originally Posted by chiko View Post
    Dear Sir

    I was supposed to start my annual leave on 10th November ,2014 up to 7th December, 2014, but due to pending works which are still in my desks I will not be able to start my leave.


    I therefore request your good office to cancel my leave till the pending works has been cleared.



    Hope my request will be considered favaourably.
    I was due to go on leave on 10th November but unfortunately I have outstanding work and will have to delay the start of my leave. I will notify you when I have cleared the work and of the date I plan to start my leave.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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