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i'm noora... a new member in this forum,,, i attend to apply for ielts exam and i want your advices to improve my english >>> topic, articles, shortstory videos ... or anything else


thank you very much
 

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When are you thinking of taking the exam and what grade are you after?
 

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Hi.

I'm Noora (no dots here) and I'm a new member in this forum. I [strike]attend[/strike] intend to apply for the [strike]ielts[/strike] IELTS exam and I want your [strike]advices[/strike] advice on how to improve my English. [strike]>>>[/strike] Topics to study, articles to read, [strike]shortstory[/strike] short stories to read, videos to watch [strike]or[/strike] and anything else you can think of.


Thank you very much.

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

Your post demonstrates several weaknesses in your written English. Look at my corrections and follow these rules of written English at all times:

- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with a single, appropriate punctuation mark.
- Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
- Always capitalise proper nouns (English, Arabic, Iraq, Microsoft, IELTS).
- Do not put a space before a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
- Always put a space after a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
 

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Re: Can you help me!!!!

When are you thinking of taking the exam and what grade are you after?

In December.
The grade should be 6 from 10
 

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Re: Can you help me!!!!

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

Your post demonstrates several weaknesses in your written English. Look at my corrections and follow these rules of written English at all times:

- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with a single, appropriate punctuation mark.
- Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
- Always capitalise proper nouns (English, Arabic, Iraq, Microsoft, IELTS).
- Do not put a space before a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
- Always put a space after a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.


Thanx emsr2d2. I appreciate ur efforts.
Please post here every information that can improve my English.
 

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Re: Can you help me!!!!

Thanx emsr2d2. I appreciate ur efforts.
Please post here every information that can improve my English.

One of the main improvements would be to not use textspeak/chatlish.

"Thanx" does not exist in English. It's "thanks".
"ur" does not exist in English. It's "your".
 

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One of the main improvements would be to not use textspeak/chatlish.

"Thanx" does not exist in English. It's "thanks".
"ur" does not exist in English. It's "your".


Ok
Thank you very much emsr2d2
 

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