[General] I let you both sleep awhile, I am going to read my book first.

[wilbertjim]

Today, he woke up very early because he wanna go to park .
He found that daddy and mummy were still sleep soundly then he said, "I let you both sleep awhile, i reading my book first."

"I let you both sleep awhile, I reading my book first."
"I let you both sleep awhile, I am going to read my book first."

Is the second sentence sound more correctly?

 

[MikeNewYork]

Why would he speak to sleeping people?

 

[wilbertjim]

Why would he speak to sleeping people?

Maybe the kid know his parent is pretending to be sleep.

 

[MikeNewYork]

That makes little sense.

 

[TheParser]

Today he woke up very early because he wanted to go to the park.
He found that Daddy and Mummy were still sleeping soundly. So he said, "I ...."
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***** NOT A TEACHER *****

Hello, Wilberjim:

I might say something like:

"I will let you both sleep a little while longer. I am going to do some reading until you wake up."


James

P.S. I have made a few suggested changes to your original post.

In post #3, I would suggest something like: "Maybe the kid knew that his parents were pretending to be asleep."