I have not yet looked at your admission essay because I noticed that there were some very basic errors in the rest of your post (for some reason, many of these errors are not repeated in your essay). Remember to follow these rules of written English at all times.
- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with a single, appropriate punctuation mark.
- Always capitalise the word "I".
- Capitalise proper nouns and acronyms correctly (MSc, for example).
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