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I don't like to write about my day positively whereas it is negative. I often wake up at 07:00 am, holding my boredom and gloom. Lazily, I prepare myself for work, and I go there by my old car. I always don't have breakfast and I will not do. When I get there I shake their dirty hands, and start my black workday at university. A whole lot of tiring administrative works are waiting for me, and although I hate them, I do them very perfectly. Because I am not a racist, I hate all people surround me, faculty members, staff and students as well as the garbage men.

I often finish my work at 2:00 pm, and go to have lunch. Don’t expect that I look for the best of restaurants, on the contrary, I search for those old and dirty restaurants because they are cheap and uncrowded. I dislike the fish and chicken, because I didn’t eat any single meal does not contain them nearly 7 years ago. Finally, I don’t like to tell what happen after having lunch, I don’t like to disturb your mood more.
 
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My Day​

I don't like to write about my day positively when it is negative. I often wake up at 07:00 am, holding my boredom and gloom inside. Lazily, I prepare myself for work, and I go there in my old car. I don't always have breakfast but sometimes I do. When I get there I shake their dirty hands, and start my black workday at university. A whole lot of tiring administrative work waits for me, and although I hate it, I do it very well. Because I am not a racist, I hate everybody -- faculty members, staff and students as well as the garbage men.

I often finish my work at 2:00 pm, and go to have lunch. Don’t expect that I look for the best of restaurants. On the contrary, I search for those old and dirty restaurants because they are cheap and uncrowded. I dislike the fish and chicken, because I used to eat nothing but fish and chicken and got tired of it. Finally, I don't want to tell you what happens after lunch. I don’t want to disturb your mood more.

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When will you submit your essay to your teacher, IAmActive?
 

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I will never submit such essay to any teacher. I am preparing myself for the IELTS test, so I daily write to get familiar with writing fastly and on every topic. :-D
 

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I will never submit [STRIKE]such[/STRIKE] this essay to [STRIKE]any[/STRIKE] a teacher. I am preparing myself for the IELTS test, so I [STRIKE]daily[/STRIKE] write daily to [STRIKE]get[/STRIKE] become familiar with writing [STRIKE]fastly[/STRIKE] quickly/fast and on every topic. :-D

Note my corrections above. There is no such word as "fastly".
 

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Note my corrections above. There is no such word as "fastly".

Yeah, well, slowly is a word. So why not fastly? ;-)

(My favorite line from that brief essay/story:

Because I am not a racist, I hate everybody -- faculty members, staff and students as well as the garbage men.

(I would have said: "Because I am not prejudiced...." But IAmActive wanted to use racist. (I aim to please. ;-)))

(I was able to make sense out of sentences that made no sense. Am I a genius or what? ;-))

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Perhaps:

I am not prejudiced. I hate everybody--faculty members, staff, students--even the garbage men.

or

I show no partiality. I hate everybody--faculty members, staff, students--even the garbage men.

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