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    Question Introduction on Me (Your corrections and comments , please !)

    My name is Ali, and I am twenty seven years old. I live in Abha, Saudi Arabia. I graduated with a bachelor's degree in Computer Science from Abha University on June 19, 2011. I trained for six months at DWDR company. I worked for one year at Abha high school as a teacher of computer. I am now a teaching assistant in the Department of Information Systems, College of Computer Science, Abha University, since April 1st, 2014.


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    Re: Introduction on Me (Your corrections and comments , please !)

    Quote Originally Posted by HL_Learner View Post
    My name is Ali, and I am twenty seven years old. I live in Abha, Saudi Arabia. I graduated with a bachelor's degree in computer science from Abha University on June 19, 2011. I trained for six months at DWDR company. I worked for one year at Abha high school as a teacher of computer science. I am now a teaching assistant in the Department of Information Systems, College of Computer Science, Abha University, since April 1st, 2014.


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    Yes, it's fine. (The term "computer science" should not be capitalized except when it is a proper noun.)


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