Can you please correct my paragraph

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Lulu88

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]Taking photos for my baby
Don't let any minute of your baby's life pass without recording it, photos and videos. Because those stunning phase of his/her life are the best, and they never coming back. So saving them will now and then remind you of the best child ever, that is yours. And they'll also be as a happy occasion making you (as a parent) blessed every time when you look at them.
this one too was a happy minutes, every photo reminds us of what he was doing then.like here when he clubbed for the first time, here what he touched the first time, and here where he pointed, look this when he smiled, and here when crawled :), and don't forget when he cried for his toys, also don't miss when he spat up/out food because he doesn't want to eat! That was naughty! And oh how happy he was there, every photo has a special value.
 

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Don't let a minute of your baby's life pass without recording it with photos and videos.

What did you mean by "clubbed"? Did you mean to say "clapped"?

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Because that stunning phase of his/her life is the best, and those precious moments will never return. So saving them will now and then will remind you of the best child ever -- yours.

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Every photo will remind you what he was doing then -- like when he clapped for the first time, like when he smiled, like when he crawled. And don't miss when he spat up food he didn't want to eat. Every photo has a special value.

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