meela
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[FONT=Calibri, sans-serif]Is there any teacher who corrects the following paragraphs
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[FONT=Calibri, sans-serif]Last Monday I went to TaJ Mobile market to repair my mobile phone set. By mistake I parked my car at Taj Mobile market I had not seen no parking sign. A lot of cars and motorcycles were already parked there. Due to rush in the mobile repairing shop I left the shop because I had no time to wait there for repairing the phone set. When I reached at the parking place where I parked my car it was not there. People at the place said your car took by police so I rushed the KK police station to get my car . When I reached the spot where my car was held, the so called police men placed their table broken and chair on the footpath demanding openly bribe to release confiscated vehicles.[/FONT]
They were disgracing the senior citizen who denies paying them bribe. I said I made a mistake and ready to pay my fine in the shape of challan. They were denying writing any challans. I said I had to attend a funeral I had no option to escape but to give them the bribe for releasing the car.
I request the higher authority to look into the matter. The police men do not do their duties and forget they hire by government to serve the people and get the salary for the services not to harasses the people and get their money .The government loss a huge amount everyday but so called policeman take the advantage and get the money from innocent people.
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[FONT=Calibri, sans-serif]Last Monday I went to TaJ Mobile market to repair my mobile phone set. By mistake I parked my car at Taj Mobile market I had not seen no parking sign. A lot of cars and motorcycles were already parked there. Due to rush in the mobile repairing shop I left the shop because I had no time to wait there for repairing the phone set. When I reached at the parking place where I parked my car it was not there. People at the place said your car took by police so I rushed the KK police station to get my car . When I reached the spot where my car was held, the so called police men placed their table broken and chair on the footpath demanding openly bribe to release confiscated vehicles.[/FONT]
They were disgracing the senior citizen who denies paying them bribe. I said I made a mistake and ready to pay my fine in the shape of challan. They were denying writing any challans. I said I had to attend a funeral I had no option to escape but to give them the bribe for releasing the car.
I request the higher authority to look into the matter. The police men do not do their duties and forget they hire by government to serve the people and get the salary for the services not to harasses the people and get their money .The government loss a huge amount everyday but so called policeman take the advantage and get the money from innocent people.