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asho333

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Good am I am new in this form can any body help me to correct my english I eant to make a memo dor my staff regarding vacation extension coz administration don't want that anybody will extend their vacation without prior notice if they fail to do so their salary will be deducted
 

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Good [STRIKE]am[/STRIKE] morning. (Or "Hello".)

I am new in this forum. Can [STRIKE]any body[/STRIKE] anybody help me to correct my English? I [STRIKE]eant[/STRIKE] want to [STRIKE]make[/STRIKE] write a memo [STRIKE]dor[/STRIKE] for my staff regarding vacation extensions [STRIKE]coz[/STRIKE] because the administration don't want [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] anybody [STRIKE]will[/STRIKE] to extend their vacation without prior notice. If they fail to [STRIKE]do so[/STRIKE] give prior notice, [STRIKE]their salary[/STRIKE] an amount of money will be deducted from their salary.

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

Please look at my corrections in red.

Try to write the memo yourself, post it here and then we will look at it.
 
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