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    Hello can you please help me,can you check if there is something wrong with sentence? thank you!

    As you've asked, here is our 'I wanna do's' and 'wanna learn' throughout our internship here in Ideaspace.


    • anything that's related to our course


    I just need corrections thank you


    Last edited by emsr2d2; 21-Nov-2014 at 09:06. Reason: Standardised font and font size

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    Re: Edit the Sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by joannideaspace View Post
    Hello, can you please help me? Can you check if there is something anything wrong with this sentence? thank you! (Unnecessary at this stage.)

    "As you've asked, here is our 'I wanna do's' and 'wanna learn' throughout our internship here in Ideaspace.


    • anything that's related to our course."


    I just need corrections. Thank you.

    Welcome to the forum.

    Where did you find the sentence you are querying? Did you write it or did you read it somewhere else? I don't understand what it is supposed to mean.

    Please look at my corrections in red to the rest of the post.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: Edit the Sentence

    Adams, if you want to post here you need to provide correct information. The word "wanna" does not exist in English.

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    Thank you! I was just sending a letter to my mentor about what we want to do while we are on our internship,

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    Re: Edit the Sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by joannideaspace View Post
    Hello can you please help me,can you check if there is something wrong with sentence? thank you!

    As you've asked, here is our 'I wanna do's' and 'wanna learn' throughout our internship here in Ideaspace.


    • anything that's related to our course


    I just need corrections thank you



    Dear [name of mentor].

    Here is a list of things we would like to do and things we would like to learn during our internship here at Ideaspace.


    [List 1]

    [List 2]

    Thank you.

    [Names of people this message is from. You said "we" so it will be from more than one person.]
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Thank you!
    Last edited by Rover_KE; 28-Nov-2014 at 09:47. Reason: Deleting unnecessary quote.

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    Re: Edit the Sentence

    Joann, there is no need quote our replies back to us or to write a new post just to say "Thank you". It makes us think there is new information or a follow-up question and we spend time opening the thread. Simply click on the "Thank" button at the bottom left-hand corner of any post you find helpful.

    It saves everybody's time.

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