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    Marriage is a very beautiful relationship. It bonds the two person in a relationship. Actually it is a relationship between two families. In case of arrange marriage two persons come in a relationship for the sake of the happiness of their families.Two unknown persons starts live together after marriage and they become a soul mate. In the starting of the relationship, life is very smooth and beautiful. They care each other, love each other. Both of them have a lots of expectations from each other. when these expectations has not full filled then there are clashes between them.There are arguments between them.
    But in reality how much there are conflicts and arguments between them but they cannot live without each other. Because we accept each other with their strength and weaknesses. Life partners cover the weaknesses of each other and also help each other to overcome from them. They never taunt each other on such weaknesses. Marriage is a very strong bond which ties two persons in a relationship and gives them strength to continue this relationship lifelong despite of difficulties.
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    #2

    Re: paragraph

    I would have a go at it if you take heed of my previous comment about leaving a space after a full-stop and comma.
    Also space out separate words and put commas where appropriate.

    Correct spelling: strength

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    #3

    Re: paragraph

    Please check it.

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    Re: paragraph

    When must you submit it to your teacher for grading?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Marriage is a relationship between two imperfect human beings.


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    #6

    Re: paragraph

    1. Do not make any more edits to your original post.
    2. Please space between paragraphs.
    3. What is the answer to Barb's question?


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    This is not any type of assignment.It is just a writing practice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mamta choudhary View Post
    Marriage is a very beautiful relationship. It bonds the two person in a relationship. Marriage is not only a relationship between two individuals, but it is also a relationship between two families. In the case of an arranged marriage two persons come together to benefit their families. Two people who don't know each other start a life together.
    You can also say:

    Two people who are strangers to each other start a life together.

    (It is certainly true that a marriage can be a beautiful relationship.)




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    Quote Originally Posted by mamta choudhary View Post
    Marriage is a bond between two individuals. Also, to is not only a relationship between two individuals, but it also a relationship between two families.
    Got to go!

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    Thanx

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