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thanks for help!
Last edited by Tailieto; 24-Nov-2014 at 13:47.
Two things. (Okay. Three.)
1. Instead of "Don't leave us," Maria smiled sadly, instead, try: "Don't leave us," Maria said. "We'll miss you terribly."
2. The girls stopped and looked at her then, around. No. (I don't know what that means.)
3. What is the idea of deleting everything from the original post?