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    Essay using a hundred words, help

    He almost went to jail for having stolen an almond tree alone. Feeling almighty because no ally was needed during the process, beside having allied himself to himself, who commited the robbery achieved all-time high of acquisition. Government made allowance for him since it didn't make allowance for the almond tree price. He used aluminum and gold alloy to all right take the tree away. The metal equipment is all-round and along the exit from the grew area the action didn't required any other apparatus alongside thief. No sound aloud aptly formed the crime alphabete based on alphabetical steps [to be continued]

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    Re: Essay using a hundred words, help

    Is that supposed to make sense?


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    Re: Essay using a hundred words, help

    Quote Originally Posted by guilhermehm View Post
    He almost went to jail for having stolen an almond tree alone. Feeling almighty because no ally was needed during the process, beside having allied himself to himself, who commited the robbery achieved all-time high of acquisition. Government made allowance for him since it didn't make allowance for the almond tree price. He used aluminum and gold alloy to all right take the tree away. The metal equipment is all-round and along the exit from the grew area the action didn't required any other apparatus alongside thief. No sound aloud aptly formed the crime alphabete based on alphabetical steps [to be continued]
    Guilhermehm, none of this makes any sense. I think your English is not yet of a standard to write an essay. Either that, or you have put your essay into something like Google Translate (in your native language) and have copied and pasted the result.

    The final sentence is absolutely incomprehensible. Try to tell us what "No sound aloud aptly formed the crime alphabete based on alphabetical steps" means, using different words.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Essay using a hundred words, help

    It makes no sense at all, but it is funny. (Apparently, we can look forward to seeing more.)


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    Re: Essay using a hundred words, help

    No sound aloud aptly took over the crime, apart from mental applauds projected by his head. The crime couldn't have been any faster and apathetic. Apart from the alloy, he has used about antiseptic for cleaning the gangway. But not anyhow. It's got to keep up appearances. Anybody wouldn't notice that he put in an appearance there. Amidst his way, beeing 3 meters apart from the glass gateway he stopped. How antique a security system might be to let entrance free from alarms! Anyway, (to be continued)

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    Re: Essay using a hundred words, help

    This is wasting our time, guilhermehm. You haven't taken any notice of our comments after post #1, you simply posted the next part of your essay. If you're not here to listen and learn, why are you here? You don't need to try to answer that question, we've closed the thread. However, you might like to ask yourself the question.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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