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    please help me to edit letter

    Dear sir/Madam

    I would like to request that my work schedule be change from full time to part time from 1 Jan 2015 for temporarily basis

    I have the responsibility for the childcare of my son(4 years 4 months) and my newly born daughter(3 months) and my wife wants start part time work.in order to meet my child care responsibilities(school drop off and pick up,helping with home work,doctors appointments for daughter etc)it would be too physically demanding emotionally draining and inconvinient for me to work full time while bringing up my child.

    Specifically,i would like to work 2 on and 4 off shift pattern and would be willing to job share.

    I am looking forward to hearing from you.

    sincerely
    bhatt



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    Re: please help me to edit letter

    Quote Originally Posted by bhatt View Post
    Dear Sir/Madam

    I would like to request that my work schedule be changed from full time to part time from 1 Jan 2015 on a temporarily basis

    I am responsible for the care of my son (4 years 4 months) and my newly born daughter (3 months), and my wife wants to start part-time work. In order to meet my childcare responsibilities (school drop off and pick up, helping with homework, doctors' appointments for my daughter etc), it would be too physically demanding, emotionally draining and inconvenient for me to work full time while bringing up my children.

    Specifically, I would like to work a 2 on and 4 off shift pattern, and would be willing to job share.

    I look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully
    bhatt


    I have tried not to change the content of your letter too much.
    I'm not a teacher of English, but I have spoken it for (almost) all of my life....

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