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    #1

    Post CONCERN LETTER

    To,
    The Pricipal
    Open mind high school
    Patna

    Sub-Request for seeking admission into 3rd std.

    Sir,
    With due respect, I Rakesh Kumar father of Shakti Raj, humbly request admission of my son in 3rd std.
    I am writing this letter to express my concern that my son is weak in studies but I believe that my
    son would benefit greatly in your school and I also believe that my son would be an ideal pupil at your school.
    I would be very greatful if you would consider my application for
    a place for my son despite his weakness in studies.
    Many thanks for your consideration
    your faithfully
    Rakesh Kumar

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    #2

    Re: CONCERN LETTER

    Don't you think it would be better to highlight your son's strengths, not his weaknesses?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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