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    Could someone please correct the following sentences?

    The fact that someone is crazy, doesn't close out that he's dangerous.

    But now he doesn't want his real name to be written, not even the city from which he comes.

    Anders could be called insane, the man who murdered almost 80 people in Norway.

    The fact that someone is crazy, doesn't close out after all, that he is dangerous.

    She is not a person, whom I had met in a hotel.

    His hand simply slipped.


    Thank you in advance for your assistance!

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    Re: Could someone please correct the following sentences?

    You need to let your teacher correct your sentences first. It's what he/she gets paid for.

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    Re: Could someone please correct the following sentences?

    It is not for an english homework. I had to translate from german to english with google translate and then correct the machine translation. I would be really glad if someone can help!

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    Re: Could someone please correct the following sentences?

    Quote Originally Posted by aretihellas View Post
    It is not for an English homework. I had to translate from German to English with Google Translate and then correct the machine translation. I would be really glad if someone can help!
    Quote Originally Posted by aretihellas View Post
    The fact that someone is crazy [no comma] doesn't mean that he's dangerous.

    But now he doesn't want his real name to be written, nor even the city from which he comes.

    Anders, the man who murdered almost 80 people in Norway, could be called insane. the man who murdered almost 80 people in Norway.

    The fact that someone is crazy, doesn't close out after all, that he is dangerous. (See above. I don't know where you get 'close out' from.)

    She is not a person [no comma] whom I had met in a hotel.

    His hand simply slipped.


    Thank you in advance for your assistance! Unnecessary. Just click 'Thank' when you get a useful answer.
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