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  1. Newbie
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    #1

    Edit the Sentence

    I'm sorry but can you please help me again? Is there Something wrong with this sentence?

    It's not new to a lot of us that there are still millions of people that aren't experiencing electricity, especially in the rural and remote areas.

    Thank you and God bless!

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    #2

    Re: Edit the Sentence

    People don't "experience" electricity"; they "have" electricity.

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    #3

    Re: Edit the Sentence

    For what reason have you written this sentence, Joann?

    Please note that a better title would have been It's not new to a lot of us...

    Extract from the Posting Guidelines:

    'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'

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