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  1. Newbie
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    can u please help me in correcting this letter, pleaseeeee :(

    the principal
    Modern school

    28 november;2014
    sub: leave application and request to give the test before the scheduled date.

    Respected mam
    My ward rohini gupta of class 11-C has to go to attend SJM (silver jublie meet) King George Medical College in Lucknow from 18 December to 21 December.
    Unfortunately, Her biology test is scheduled on 18 december which she would not be able to give on that day.
    Acknowledging/ understanding the fact that giving the test is very important. I would like to request you to please give her the permission to give the test on 15 December;2014.
    We would be gratefull to you if u grant her the permission to give the test.
    thanking you
    CLASS 11 C

  2. emsr2d2's Avatar
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    Re: can u please help me in correcting this letter, pleaseeeee :(

    We "take" a test.
    Don't capitalise "Her" after a comma.
    "u" is not a word.
    Capitalise Rohini Gupta in the first line of the letter.
    Capitalise November.
    Don't put a semi-colon after November.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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