We'd like to move forward with the booking but was wondering how come there's no pict

[B45]

We'd like to move forward with the booking but was wondering how come there's no picture of the second bedroom with the second bed?

Is this sentence okay?

 

[Rover_KE]

Change 'was' to 'were'.

 

[B45]

Does that make the sentence grammatically correct and more native - like?

 

[riquecohen]

Yes, it does. I would also replace "how come" with "why."

 

[Rover_KE]

I'd replace 'move forward' with 'go ahead'.

 

[emsr2d2]

I might use "We would like to proceed with our booking ...". I would probably then say "However, I would be grateful if you could send me a photo of the second bedroom with the second bed". (I assume there is a photo of the second bedroom but with just one bed in it.)

 

[Tdol]

Yes, it does. I would also replace "how come" with "why."

So would I- how come may sound a bit aggressive.