[Essay] The main regret and desires. Pleas correct my grammar

[asphyxia]

The main regret.
When I’m looking back on my life, there is a lot of regrets and bad decisions that I made, but the main regret was spine surgery. Two years ago it turned out that my spine is very weak and I need an operation. After many persuasion from my parents and doctors I agreed to have a surgery and put implant to hold up my spine. The main reason I agreed was telling me that I won’t have a children in the future, because my spine wouldn’t stand it and my life can’t be normal. In the other hand I was scared, because I read about many complications during or after the surgery. Considering pros and cons I made the final decision and I was going to the hospital for one month. Now I regret this, because my back hurts every day and the doctors propose me another surgery to fix it, but my answer is “ thanks, but no thanks”. It is too painful.


Desire to changing my life.
Many people wants to change their life, because from many reason and I need some change too. I want to changed my life so dramatically. I so used to struggling that I couldn’t imagine a life in which every day was easy. I couldn’t grasp the idea that other people’s happiness could be real. I didn’t want to burden other people with my depression, but I tried to act normal. I tried to be like everyone else. I truly trapped in this normal world. Everyday is the same. The University, home. The same boring people, the same problems which day to day are duplicated. I just want to escape to some quiet place on earth where I will not have anything to worry about. Somewhere where there is peace and harmony. Somewhere where the other doesn’t t tell me what to do and how to live.

Thank you for your help.

 

[Tarheel]

Try:

When I look back on my life I have a lot of regrets because of bad decisions that I made.


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[asphyxia]

Thank you for the advice, but what about gammatical errors? Can you see what's wrong with this sentences?
I want to do it right, but I don't trust myself when it comes to grammar.

 

[Tarheel]

Thank you for the advice, but what about gammatical errors? Can you see what's wrong with these sentences?

Yes, of course I can. (As Monk would say: "It's a blessing. And a curse.")

I want to do it right, but I don't trust myself when it comes to grammar.

Ah, I don't trust myself when if comes to women.

(This is not homework, is it?)

 

[asphyxia]

No, I'm learning English at home with my tutor and this is only exercise just for me.
I have to write more, because my grammar is really weak :/

 

[Tarheel]

The main regret that I have is having had spine surgery. Two years ago it turned out that my spine was very weak and I needed an operation. After many discussions with my parents and with doctors I agreed to have the surgery, and an implant was put in to hold up my spine. The main reason I agreed to it was the doctor telling me I wouldn't be able to have children in the future, and that I wouldn't have a normal life if I didn't have the surgery.

:up:

 

[Tarheel]

In the other hand I was scared, because I had read about the many complications that can occur during or after surgery.

Yes, that can be a problem.

:-|

 

[Tarheel]

Say:

I considered the pros and the cons, and I finally decided to do it.

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Got to go!