Talking to a colleague about an order invoice. I say: That order has two hats so pl

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Talking to a colleague about an order invoice. I say:

That order has two hats so please pack and ship out two hats immediately.

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We have one order with two hats purchased, please ship out the package soon.

I underlined the part that is confusing to me. Is it worded properly?
 

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"That/This order is for two hats..."
 
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What about the second sentence? One order with two hats...
 

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"Please pack and ship them immediately."
 
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