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I have a sentence for the topic, filial piety.. I don't know it make sense or not.
I really need suggestion for it, and here's the sentence below, thanks.
She grew up with the love and care of her mother, giving her love and support to her mother last october when her poor mother got seriously ill in bed.
Yes, it looks great and readable.
I have another question. So "when" is a wrong usage in the original sentence?
I am not sure about that. Can I just omit "when" or still have to change to "while"?
Oh, it seems that I cannot omit "when", the "when" sounds to be a conj from a clause to next.
Last edited by xobli; 07-Dec-2014 at 15:38.
OK. Another possibility:
Most (if not all) readers will know that the second "she" refers to her mother.
She grew up with the love and nurturing of her mother, and gave her loving support to her mother last October when she was seriously ill and bedridden.
OK. (Ron reminds himself to stop posting while drinking.)