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    Cool Christmas Writing Challenge

    Rewrite the below passage, making only the minor changes necessary to correct the errors.


    Its telling that keeping up with the Jonesesís ostentatious Christmas displays has seperated my community into 3 groups the affluent incrowd the wannabes and non christians such as my family. None of the 3 most prominent citizens each from one of the factions are pleased with the other two. On the drive home each evening, the various decorative displays reveal an evolving story.

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    Re: Christmas Writing Challenge

    We don't do students' work for them.

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