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  1. Newbie
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    Is this sentence is meaningful ? If not how can I make it better ?

    I am still struggling with my SOP and I am wondering if the sentence below is clear for readers?

    The most interesting research fields that I wish to continue working on is Computer Architecture, Embedded Systems, and FPGA based reconfigurable hardwares, all utilized for complicated software applications.


    ( I want to say the 3 Bold ones are used to server complicated software applications.)

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    Re: Is this sentence is meaningful ? If not how can I make it better ?

    The [most interesting] research fields that I wish to continue working on are Computer Architecture, Embedded Systems, and FPGA based reconfigurable hardware, all of which are utilized by complex software applications.

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    Re: Is this sentence is meaningful ? If not how can I make it better ?

    I am not a teacher.

    I would prefer, 'work in a field' to 'work on a field'.

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