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    Need help with my application

    I am applying for graduate research and I would like to receive grammatical feedback on the following paragraph:

    In the past two years, I have already been introduced to program X during my master thesis and an internship, which I both performed at company X. Today I am applying to perform graduate research in program X.
    Last edited by freddy8; 13-Dec-2014 at 12:25. Reason: wrong term

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    Re: Need help with my application

    Quote Originally Posted by freddy8 View Post

    In the past two years, I have already been introduced to program X during my master thesis and I worked as an intern, both at Company X. Today I am applying to do graduate research in program X.
    Now it's perfect.


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