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    Sentence correction - parallel sentence structure

    Dear Teacher,

    Please let me know if the structure of the following sentence is correct:

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    Yes, rational thinker believes in a God who is non-religious, who is in a non-human form and who is not an imaginary creation of humans. "

    My doubt is mainly about repeating "who is" in the sentence.

    Thank you!

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    Re: Sentence correction - parallel sentence structure

    "Who is" and its repetition are very natural.

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    Re: Sentence correction - parallel sentence structure

    You need an article before "rational thinker." Or else to make it plural and conjugate the verb.

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    Re: Sentence correction - parallel sentence structure

    I forgot to add an article. Thank you!

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