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    given

    Please proofread this sentence. Is it natural to native speakers? If not, could you help me check it? Thank you.

    But most wonder if it is worth investigating into education given that high education can not ensure high employment.

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    Re: given

    Please proofread this sentence. Is it natural to native speakers? If not, could you help me check correct/edit it? Thank you

    But most wonder if it is worth investigating into education given that high education can not ensure high employment.
    But most people wonder if it is worth investing in education given that a high level of education cannot ensure good employment.

    not a teacher

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