Welcome to the forum.
For a start, the teachers here would ask you to get the basics right - pay attention to the capitalization of proper nouns, the articles and proper spacing of sentences, as demonstrated in the sentences you have written.
There is no shortcut to good writing. You just have to keep practising and get your work corrected so that you know where you go wrong and what needs to be improved. I am also trying to improve my writing by participating in this forum.
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