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Today when I went to the classroom, all students had sat silently in the classroom.There is a pin drop silence and then I made an announcement that our school will be going for trekking in couple of days. We will go to a hill station for trekking.It is complusory for all the students, so everyone will have came for trekking. It is a part of your curriculum.Every student has deposited a sum amount for it and read more information regarding trekking from the notice on the notice board.By listened that, all students were screamed. They all are very much excited for trekking.
 

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Today when I went to the classroom, all students had sat silently in the classroom.There is a pin drop silence and then I made an announcement that our school will be going for trekking in couple of days. We will go to a hill station for trekking.It is complusory for all the students, so everyone will have came for trekking. It is a part of your curriculum.Every student has deposited a sum amount for it and read more information regarding trekking from the notice on the notice board.By listened that, all students were screamed. They all are very much excited for trekking.
There are too many 'trekking's. You should think of some alternatives, eg. 'it', 'this activity', or nothing, as in "so everyone will have to come."
Put a space after a period. Check your verb forms - the red ones. There are also other errors.
 
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By listen that, all students screamed.
All students sat silently in the classroom
 
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Please tell me other errors also
 

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"By listen that" is so profoundly wrong that it is hard to correct. "On hearing that" is my best guess. Even so, "all students screamed" is also wrong. "All the students screamed" or "all the students were screaming." You need the "the".
 
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