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Hi there, please help me with this. In my writing, my teacher suggest me to use "should" instead of "have to" in the second sentence of my answer.
Q: Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Answer(introduction): That the students should commence learning a second language in a very early age has been a topic of controversial debate in our modern life. Therefore, the question here is do our children have to learn a foreign language as early as they start to learn basic science and mathematics at schools or not?
As I used "should" in the previous sentence, i preferred to use another alternative "have to" so as to not repeat the same word "should".
what is wrong with "have to"? Can i use "ought to" instead of the suggested word "should"?
Anyway, I am not totally OK with this part of my writing "do our children have to/should/ought to learn". How can i improve it?
Thanks for your attention.