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    #1

    Could you please let me know when the registration will be closed?

    Could you please help me to revise the following short email?

    "Dear ...,

    Could you please let me know when the registration will be closed?



    I would like to attend this seminar and I have to wait until next year for my supervise back from the annual leave and pay via internal transfer.

    Kind Regards,
    ... "

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    #2

    Re: Could you please let me know when the registration will be closed?

    Quote Originally Posted by MS3330 View Post
    Could you please help me to revise the following short email?

    "Dear ...,

    Could you please let me know when the registration will be closed?



    I would like to attend this seminar, and I have to wait until next year for my supervise to get back from his/her annual leave, and then I will pay the tuition via internal transfer.

    Kind Regards,
    ... "

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    #3

    Re: Could you please let me know when the registration will be closed?

    "Supervise" is incorrect.

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    #4

    Re: Could you please let me know when the registration will be closed?

    What is an 'internal transfer'
    Shouldn't it be 'telegraphic transfer'if it is for transfer of funds?

    not a teacher

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    #5

    Re: Could you please let me know when the registration will be closed?

    Does anybody use a telegraph these days?

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    #6

    Re: Could you please let me know when the registration will be closed?

    The transaction is done through internet of course but the term stays.
    What do you can it then?

    P.S. Maybe you can call it inter-bank online transfer.

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    #7

    Re: Could you please let me know when the registration will be closed?

    I have not heard that term recently. I think your second sentence should be "What do you call it then?"

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    #8

    Re: Could you please let me know when the registration will be closed?

    The term 'telegraphic transfer' still appears in the bank forms when we do fund transfers, where I am from.

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    #9

    Re: Could you please let me know when the registration will be closed?

    Strange. Quite out of date.

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    Re: Could you please let me know when the registration will be closed?

    Quote Originally Posted by MikeNewYork View Post
    "Supervise" is incorrect.
    That should, of course, be supervisor. (I didn't suggest a change to "internal transfer" because i wasn't sure what was intended by that.)


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