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    A friend is the important part of our life. Friends are those persons with whom we don't have any blood relation but there is one relationship and it is a relation of love. A good friend never leave you in your difficult time and always stand by you.They always come when you need someone and he will leave all his important work but they never leave you alone. Difficult time is the best time to realize who is your true friend. Friend is someone with whom you feel comfortable and easily share your thoughts and feelings. A true friend loves you unconditionally and understands you and you also love to accompany them. Actually friend know all about you from small to big things of your life. They know you more than yourself. A good friend always advice you and show you a right path to lead a happy life. A true friend is feeling happy when you are happy and feeling sad when you are sad. A good friend is a best gift of your life. And if you have a good friend that means you are the luckiest person. Friendship is a beautiful relationship of this world.
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    Re: Friends

    It is good to have friends. It (friendship) is one of the things that makes life worth living.

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    Re: Friends

    Mamta Choudhury, do you have a question for us? You need to remember to put a space after every full stop.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Friends

    A friend can be a blood relative. Also, a friend is not necessarily a lover. Certainly, a friend is somebody you feel comfortable talking to. (Notice that I make a space after each period/full stop.)


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    Re: Friends

    Could u please check this paragraph.

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    Re: Friends

    Ok. I'll make some suggestions/corrections. (Can you tell the difference?)

    Quote Originally Posted by mamta choudhary View Post
    It is important to have friends.
    Last edited by Tarheel; 05-Jan-2015 at 19:57. Reason: fix something

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    Quote Originally Posted by mamta choudhary View Post
    A true friend is feeling happy when you are happy and feeling sad when you are sad.
    A good friend is someone who shows empathy for you.


    (Are these your thoughts, or did you copy them from something?)

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    Re: Friends

    Have you been paying any attention to what I (or anybody else) has been saying to you?

    A true friend is somebody who knows you better than you know yourself. (That is something you said, but I rephrased it so it makes more sense in everyday English. (The answer to that, by the way, is: "Really?"))

    https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/t...16757-A-Friend

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    I haven't mean that, A good friend is someone who shows sympathy for you but a good friend is someone who always with you in your good and bad time.

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    Yes, I have been paying full attention to your suggestions and I am very thankful to you.

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