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Well, have fun wherever you're going tomorrow, and let's hang out again soon.

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Well, have fun wherever you're going tomorrow! And let's hang out again soon.

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Well, have fun wherever you're going tomorrow. And let's hang out again soon.

Are all three okay?
 

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The first is a comma splice. Change the comma to a semicolon.

The other two are fine.
 

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In any case, it's not one of those cases where the punctuation greatly changes the meaning (e.g. eats, shoots and leaves). I personally view punctuation as ancillary with respect to the language, and not a big deal if the meaning is not confused by it.
 

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Unless the post was edited, there is a conjunction, so there's no comma splice.
 

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Yes, but the second clause does not follow from the first. The second clause should be a new sentence.
 

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It certainly could/should from a logic point-of-view, but with the conjunction, it's not a comma splice. (Lord knows we see enough true comma splices here.)
 

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I would find a semi-colon there very strange, especially before the word "and". If the "and" were to be removed, a semi-colon would work (in my opinion).
 

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To deny that it is a comma splice even though the second "sentence" does not follow logically, assumes that an independent sentence cannot start with the word "And". Sorry, but I don't buy that. That prohibition was buried decades ago. If you don't like the semicolon, then use a period/full stop. In either case, it is weird as written.
 

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Mike, I usually agree with you, but on this we are completely opposed. Of course I am fine with sentences starting with "And" or "But" in all but the most formal writing, but calling a sentence with a conjunction a comma splice doesn't make any sense!
 

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I understand. This is a different situation. If one replaces the second sentence with an unrelated sentence not starting with "and", it would be a commas splice. In this case, since "and" can begin a completely independent sentence, I see no difference. We can agree to disagree.
 
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