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    Is this sentence okay: It was a pleasure meeting everybody and I had such an amazing

    Is this sentence okay:

    It was a pleasure meeting everybody and I had such an amazing time on my trip to NYC that I'm moving to NYC early next year.

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    Re: Is this sentence okay: It was a pleasure meeting everybody and I had such an ama

    Yes, but I'd suggest dropping the "and" and making it two sentences.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: Is this sentence okay: It was a pleasure meeting everybody and I had such an ama

    I'd also suggest that you drop the second "to NYC", and replace it with "there".
    Last edited by Grumpy; 29-Dec-2014 at 12:11.
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